Opinion Paragraph (Whether students should study abroad.)

I think Kansai Gaidai students should study abroad.
Other three people agree with me. Maybe most of students enter Kansai Gaidai to study abroad.
I want to study abroad too. But studying abroad takes high cost. So students make money in part-time job for studying abroad ,or study hard and get high score on TOEFL.
So there are Kansai Gaidai students who can't study abroad.
Finally, I think studying abroad is very valuable for students but it takes us too much cost!!!!