Problem / Solution Paragraphs

Overcrowded on lunch time in Kansai Gaidai is a very pleasant problem for students. Because students must line on a long line to buy lunch. Cafeteria is too crowded, also convenience store and Mcdonald's. When we go out of university, 711 is also too corwded. If we could buy lunch in cafeteria, problem would happen soon. we can't find the table to sit in cafeteria. As a result, we must have lunch too hot outside like a desert or too cold outside like a Alaska.
Last year, there wasn't lunch time. Then we felt very comfortable. Overcrowded wasn't happened.

Solution to the problem of overcrowded on lunch time is to reconsider about lunch time. For acting this solution, we should complain of overcrowded on lunch time to staff or president of university. I think this solution is best way to solve this problem. But this is hard to act. Because for not being lunch time, we suggest this problem staff and president, discuss this problem.
Finally, the problem is solved. this solution needs many times. So I think that solving this problem is difficult. But all of students may be hope that there isn't lunch time.

Opinion Paragraph 2

I think she was not beautiful. But anybody can become beautiful to make up and modify them picture. In the video, first she was made up by many make-up artists and was cut by hair dresser. Next, she was taken picture by photographer. And staff chose best picture of her.
After that, this picture modified. Finally picture of her turned into a big sign that was on the downtown and she was more beautiful than in the past.
This movie makes me strange feelings. I think this movie's message is "Our goods make you beautiful. If you were not beautiful."

Opinion Paragraph (Whether students should study abroad.)

I think Kansai Gaidai students should study abroad.
Other three people agree with me. Maybe most of students enter Kansai Gaidai to study abroad.
I want to study abroad too. But studying abroad takes high cost. So students make money in part-time job for studying abroad ,or study hard and get high score on TOEFL.
So there are Kansai Gaidai students who can't study abroad.
Finally, I think studying abroad is very valuable for students but it takes us too much cost!!!!